Coaching
Work with David.
A decade of coaching working writers, distilled into a way of working that finds the story first. Group or one-on-one — built around the script you have to tell.
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Free 15-Minute Consultation
No pitch, no pressure. A quick call to talk through your project and your goals, and find the right way to work together.
The Group Intensive
Chapter: The 10-Week Intensive
An exclusive write club for professional writers. Chapter runs like a writers' room, not a lecture — a small, vetted group, weekly sessions, and one finished script by the end of each ten-week chapter.
We give and receive notes with mutual respect, develop each project with laser focus, and reconnect with why we love to write. Run and moderated by David.
Book a call to apply- A small, vetted group of professional writers
- Weekly workshop sessions across ten weeks
- One completed script per writer, per chapter
- Daily writing and weekly peer review
- In person in Burbank, or by video
One-on-One
Private Coaching
Work directly with David on your project, at whatever stage it's in. A small roster, so spots open in cycles — every call starts with the free consultation.
Writing Coaching
One-on-one coaching built around your goals — concept, character, and structure, on your story's terms.
Book a callSuperior Script Coverage
Not a verdict on your draft. A one-of-a-kind report focused on improving the project around your goals.
Book a callPerfect Pitch
Build and rehearse a pitch you can walk into any room and deliver with command. Includes three practice pitches.
Book a callThe Wise Revise
A final-revision pass with weekly sessions and detailed page notes to strengthen story, character, and craft.
Book a callThe Royal Treatment
Come with a concept, leave with a Treatment — a full roadmap before you write Fade In.
Book a callVisionary Revision
Two full revisions, second draft and polish, with weekly sessions and a winning revision strategy.
Book a callStart-to-Finish Development
Logline to final draft. Your coach through the entire development of a script.
Book a callProfessional Table Read
A table read of your script, cast by veteran director-actor Milena Govich, hosted in Burbank.
Book a callFrom the writers David works with
“Chapter is like a writing group on steroids. Not only do you get insightful and executable feedback, but David's story breaking system takes what is normally a daunting process and distills it into easily understandable pieces. It's completely changed the way I write.”
Questions
Who is coaching for?
Working and emerging writers who want more than standard coverage — a hands-on partner to take the script apart and rebuild it with intention.
Do we meet in person or online?
Both. Sessions happen over video, or in person in the Los Angeles area.
What's the difference between Chapter and private coaching?
Chapter is a ten-week group intensive — a writers' room with a small, vetted group. Private coaching is one-on-one, built entirely around your project.
How do I start?
Book a free fifteen-minute call. We'll talk through where you are and what you need, then find the right fit.
Let's find your story.
Start with a free fifteen-minute call. We'll figure out the right way to work together.
Book a free 15-minute callPrefer to write first? Send a note.